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Friday 13 March 2015


You have to be in to win, so when Road Hogs announced their competition to name and explain the hedgehog in the scene below, we had to give it a go.

One day Mr Frank was walking to Jenny's house. He knocked on the door. Knock! Knock! No one answered. He looked in the window. There was Jenny dancing with someone else. He pulled the balloon out of his hand and looked at it. He went back to his own house and went on top of the roof to let go of the love he had inside the balloon. Dakota-Rose

Golfey is not happy because his BFF died from a golf ball to the head at Road Hogs. Flyn

It was a nice rainy day on the 12th October when my friend Truffle had a heart attack. He fell to the ground screaming. It was so scary that he almost died. He let go of the balloon because he didn't want his friend to die. Daniel

I think that he is wishing for someone to care for him and to have fun with. I think he is letting go of the balloon because he wants a friend. Sophia

Hedgy Jr saw his favourite balloon. He went outside to play with it. As he picked a flower he accidentally let go of the balloon. Lochlan

One day a little hedgehog saw something on the moon. He flew up on a spaceship and saw another hedgehog. He flew back down and brought a balloon, then went over to a big rock and closed his eyes hoping that the other little hedgehog would get it. Eden

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